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Mein Geschenk by ~funky-mish:iconfunky-mish:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Teen or Young Romance > Fixed


Mein Geschenk                                                      - My Gift

Ich habe ein geschenk für dich                                - I have a gift for you
Zu dich für immer eidlich                                        - To you forever sworn
Halten sie es schließt zu deine Herz                          - Hold it close to your heart
Lassen sie es wegnehmen deine Schmerz                 - Let it take away your pain
Nehmen sie es mit dich überall                                - Take it with you everywhere
Machen sie es deine Lieblingsbesitz von alle              - Make it your favourite possession of all
Weil es nur für dich ist                                             - Because it is only for you
Und ich verspreche keine hinterlist                           - And I promise no treachery
Ich hoffe, dass es dich glück bringt                           - I hope it brings you happiness
Und ich hoffe, dass es deine traurigkeit umbringt       - And I hope it kills your sadness
So hier ist mein abgebot                                          - So here is my offering
Meine aufrichtigkeit ist nicht überbot                         - My sincerity is not surpassed
Mein geschenk ist für dich lediglich                            - My gift is for you solely
Mein geschenk für dich ist mich                                - My gift to you is me
©2005-2009 ~funky-mish
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Author's Comments

I said in my journal I'd write a new poem and now I have :D

It's written for my lovely girlfriend :heart: Amber :heart: , as those of you who know me probably would be able to guess. I did not focus a great deal on rhythm, and as ever it is probably riddled with grammatical errors. The proverbial life goes on as always... and I live in hope that some day I shall find the power to eradicate these indiscrepancies from my poetry and be able to produce some gramattically pure and correct work. However, until that day comes my current poems shall suffice.

I spoke like the g-man :D I'm cool B)

Oh well, hope you like the poem!

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~x-Angelito-x Aug 2, 2005, 10:01:35 AM
Wow. This is really nice.
Reminds me of a character I made up...Heh.
:+fav:

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Dance with me babe..:heart:
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*vampire-love Aug 2, 2005, 12:32:18 PM
aww, really really sweet mishy! :) :p

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~shorty-rox Aug 3, 2005, 12:24:45 AM
that poem is rele sweet, as well as touching. Amber nearly had tears in her eyes, when she read it :P lol You're a really good poet :)

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Hello

I'm new here . that's why i don't have any art work at the moment, I will do soon!
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~funky-mish Aug 3, 2005, 2:39:16 AM
Thanks everyone! :hug: to all

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Du bist meine perfekte droge...
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~raining-pixies Aug 3, 2005, 10:41:08 AM
:aww: Aw Will that's adorable! :hug:
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~a-meemish-me Aug 4, 2005, 1:50:06 AM
:hug: I told you before it was great, but I may just have to repeat myself. It is so cute. I prefer what I can understand of the German though (that would be very little without the translation) as it sounds better, why aern't you taking german next year Will?

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'Am I beautiful?
Am I useable?'
~ The Killing Lights ~ AFI
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~funky-mish Aug 4, 2005, 2:17:11 AM
I'm not taking german because although I enjoy it, I'm focusing on things that will help me in journalism.

Thanks Becky and Lorraine for the comments :D This poem has turned out to be more popular than I expected :)

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Du bist meine perfekte droge...
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~EB-Guin Aug 4, 2005, 5:21:52 AM
:heart: :+fav: :smooch:

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~matt1783 Aug 5, 2005, 10:50:35 AM
:) deffo one of the best poems you have written so far. its very touching i really like it :)
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